Immortality Begins With Internal Breathing
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Immortality Begins With Internal Breathing

70%
36 Reviews
Author:
Mo Yiguan(莫奕琯)
Translator:
Dorlaken
Transported to a new world, Lin Zheyu awakens the "Heaven Rewards the Diligent" system, a power that transforms his sweat into progress. Every technique he learns appears in his status window, and every drop of effort generates Origin Force to accelerate his cultivation.
Starting from the bottom, his path combines relentless training with strategic growth. The system doesn't grant him power for free, but ensures his dedication always pays off as he climbs the ranks of the martial world.
This is the story of a man using every advantage to forge his own path. 
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538 Chapters
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Yuewen
Chinese
Cultivation
Cheat Systems
LitRPG
Slice of Life
Action
Wuxia
Reincarnator

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70%
36 Reviews
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Miothan
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7 months ago
Not recommended
If you started to read this since it sounded very promising when you read the summary :

"Through discipline, persistence, and relentless training, he grows stronger. Steady, low-key, and unwavering, he forges a road to longevity that belongs to him alone.

If you enjoy cultivation stories that emphasize effort over shortcuts, resilience over luck, and martial growth built brick by brick, then this is a journey worth following."

Then you will be disappointed, from the very FIRST chapter we learn that MC gets a cheat-system which let's him fast-track hes skills....so much for persistent hard work, a load of bullshit. I have read up to chapter 36 which is the up-to-date released chapter as of today, and MC has used the system a few times already to just literally advance in the martial arts he has been taught to the point where hes viewed as some super genius with super comprehension abilities and otherworldly martial arts talent/cultivation talent.

For anyone wanting to read a novel which the summary was talking about....this one ain't it, instead this one is more akin to a superman story, haven't had a single tragic moment as of yet since MC just beats the crap out of the few villains he has dealt with so-far, all thanks to the system he uses (yes, it is ALL thanks to the system he uses ALL of it so-far)

I do not recommend this story if you are looking for a novel where the MC really does take no short-cuts (ironic that it says that in the summary what a load of shit).

Lunn
7 months ago
Not recommended
I’m only giving a negative review because the story advertised itself as a slow-paced one focused on effort and steady growth. It’s not that the novel is bad — it’s just completely different from what it promised to be. If you’re looking for a power fantasy, you might enjoy it, but if you expected a slow and realistic progression, it’s honestly pretty disappointing. It was supposed to have a slow and steady pace focused on hard work and growth, but instead, the protagonist ends up with a ridiculous cheat system that makes everything too easy. All the tension and sense of effort are completely gone, and the story quickly loses its charm. I was expecting a journey of struggle and gradual improvement.

RavenWolfNorth
7 months ago
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Edited
Not recommended
There is a hint of worldbuilding going on, except it's exactly the same setting you've seen everywhere else. Someone new to the Jianghu genre might find novelty in the mafia-like politics present in the city MC lives in, but veterans will find it better elsewhere. Especially truthful when he is strong enough to leave the city and politics no longer matters.

Nobody, besides the MC, matters in this story. As most stories where the MC shatters powerscaling speed records, everyone else becomes unimportant in the story arc they're introduced and then forgotten after the arc is over.

MC has reincarnated. Does it add anything to the story? No, it subtracts. The primary use is to allow the author to be lazy. The MC starts the story proper as a storyteller in a teahouse drawing in crowds, except all of his writing is just stolen from famous Chinese novels. There is no other mention of Earth or his life on Earth.

We are told the MC was an author (and his new body was a scholar), but that is useless compared with his apparent memorization of cool stories other people made. If the author had MC write his own great stories, then there might actually be substance to his character. So far, his only characteristics are training really hard all the time, and the ever predictable "hides his true strength."

MC has the power of Training Montage. He uses it, the next sentence describes him going into a trance where he trains the skill into the next level and then it's over. You can't really call "training for a couple months" diligence. Later, he uses this power for perfect rejuvenation because the author was loose with how his power worked in the beginning.

I recommend "Immortality Starts with Hunting" instead. The author there may follow much of the same issues plaguing Jianghu cultivation novels, but at least he tried something new with the Ghost Road and Yang/Yin duality.

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